This was my original pitch poster for my senior animation, "The Eccentricities of F.H. Cilley" During critique it was noted that it didn't convey enough story telling. Also the bridge motif was a little to obscure. The text wasn't readable, and his purple tie stood out too much.
I'm really happy with the way my revised poster came out. I changed the color of the background some. Muted down the tie. Took out the bridge theme all together, and tried to incorporate some story telling by placing him in a living room setting with old, victorian pictures on the walls. Lastly, I found some great text that I had to painstakingly photoshop cut out from an old newspaper ad from the early 1900s.
This was my original pitch poster for my senior animation, "The Eccentricities of F.H. Cilley" During critique it was noted that it didn't convey enough story telling. Also the bridge motif was a little to obscure. The text wasn't readable, and his purple tie stood out too much.
I'm really happy with the way my revised poster came out. I changed the color of the background some. Muted down the tie. Took out the bridge theme all together, and tried to incorporate some story telling by placing him in a living room setting with old, victorian pictures on the walls. Lastly, I found some great text that I had to painstakingly photoshop cut out from an old newspaper ad from the early 1900s.
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